Hey Cassie! I think your grammer is fine, i'm not the greatest at that anyways but, i think your infograph needs more information on what cause allergic reactions because I see that it says "mineral cosmetics ....doesn't cause allergic reaction" I think you need to incorporate the bad cosmetics to allow us to see the differences. Some people had no idea in the first place what was in the other kinds of cosmetics that are dangerous. There needs to ba an average for products that people normally use, then have the information you already have stand out as being so much better or healthier.
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I can't read this at all :'( I tried taking it off and zooming but that didn't work either. I'll look at your print out i guess and comment again.
Hey Cassie! I think your grammer is fine, i'm not the greatest at that anyways but, i think your infograph needs more information on what cause allergic reactions because I see that it says "mineral cosmetics ....doesn't cause allergic reaction" I think you need to incorporate the bad cosmetics to allow us to see the differences. Some people had no idea in the first place what was in the other kinds of cosmetics that are dangerous. There needs to ba an average for products that people normally use, then have the information you already have stand out as being so much better or healthier.
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